You are under direct orders to rock out...
Rock out cuz your'e finally weightless
Rock out like you jumped out of a plane and your falling at the speed of "Bring It On"
Rock out like you finally found another human being in Zombieland
Rock out like it's only your first time
Rock out like you're finally coming home and ain't nobody gonna make you leave again
Rock out because the best remembrance of the beach, is the sand in your pockets
Rock out like some day is today
Rock out because your prank on Dwight just succeeded
Rock out like "the real you" was finally noticed
Rock out because most of society thinks your'e a freak
Rock out like being priceless is a necessity
Rock out like it's a simple thing, even though everyone is watching
Rock out like the RollerCoaster is about to throw you to Hell and back again
Rock out like you were when you were living, right before life got in the way
Rock out like your'e falling with style to infinity and beyond
Rock out like the resonance of your legends will ring in the worlds to come
Rock out like it's your best day because the most priceless thing is living to the fullest
I like this! I especially like the last line! and I like the line about coming home and never having to leave that was really good!
ReplyDeleteHa zombieland thats good
ReplyDeletenicely done! my favorite part is "Rock out like music is all you have" because sometimes it is and its all that gets you through the day. its the only way to express yourself.
ReplyDeleteNot so sure i like the way its put together though. Like its a haiku or something. But if thats your thing, than by all means its your thing. And i think you should have added more lines, because what you have is pretty good. But there are many of them.
ReplyDeletei really really like how you used the line speed "bring it on" it really has power to it! i also really like the zombieland line too!!! I LOVE that movie!!!
ReplyDeleteThere, more lines, better structure, I think I should probably get credit for this now... eh?
ReplyDelete"Rock out because the best remembrance of the beach, is the sand in your pockets"
ReplyDeleteCool.
Maybe you should post more on this thing.
this was awesome. i loved the highlighted words they were awesome.
ReplyDeletethat was really cool how you highlighted the blue words and they made their own sentence!
ReplyDeletethought it was really awesome how the blue words made their own sentence... then the last sentence was the same one and it made it not as creative. wish it would have been different. that would have really been the cat's meow.
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